draft Prospol corrections

Draft proposal correction

The purpose of this report is to get pitch and sell the idea to producers to get the film made for my short webisode. The primarily research that I carried is to look at recent short films and recent films that are out in the cinema. Another primarily research I did was talked to my family and friends about my idea for a short horror film, and they think it was a good idea for a short. As I was doing my primarily research I found out that my target audience for short horror/ thriller films are more mature and maybe 18. As I watching short horror and thriller short list on YouTube that most of them are older. By doing my research that my target audience is going 18 and over because teenagers do not watch short/thriller films they just know what is advertise on TV or social media  

However the secondary research that I have done is that I have researched more into kick starter which is a possibility to sign up with them to help to produces my short films around the world.  Also   looked at most popular films and look at overheads such as, budget, gross and opening weekend cost and comments receive. Another secondary research that all film directors have to acknowledge is BBCF that all films get examined by and but age rate, this is because BBCF are trying to protect valuable  people. For my budget I have considerate all of my equipment, locations and props. For my short film I would like to spend around £150-200 altogether. The name of my film is ‘knock knock who’s there?’   

2. Film Synopsis

Short film idea: twins that have the same friends but ever one likes the other twin better. The other twins get very jealous, so one afternoon they play a game and the twin kills them one by one. When one dies the victims signs symbols that they all have and lights switches off when someone die.

Twist at the end- that twins kills her own friends and leaves her sister slowly dying and confuse why she did this.

Hook- all trying to find out who is killing each other. 

Twist- is that she leaves her twin to die and kills all her friends. However, one friend that the suspect thought that she killed survived and knocks her unconscious and tries to help the twin and herself escape   

Tagline- 'you will never know what is going on in the inside but outside seems fine'

My idea is influence by all the Hunger Games (shot gun when someone die) and Ouija (playing game then wired and not normal happens)

 3. Film Rating

For my short film my age rating is going to 15 because in my film is going to be strong violence, some strong language such as f**k and s**t in my film which might be suitable for young people. Also for 15 for horror it can allowed At 15 [1] strong threat and horror as long as there is no sustained focus on sadistic or sexualised threat.  BBCF age rates U,PG,12A,12,15,18,R18

4. Primarily Research

For my primary research I ask my family and friends about my idea and look out recent horror films that are popular in 2015- 2016, I also looked at YouTube on short horror playlist and as I was reading the comment I found out most of the people that watch short horror films are young adults. For my film I am going to make horror/ thriller sequences.

5. Secondary Research

For secondary I found out what are different age rate for films and where I can upload my short horror film on such as, Netflix or films festival also I know how to sign up for  London Short Festival. I also found out that Kickstarter is good company to help you build up your own project and produces your work online and gain views. By watching the short horror film on YouTube I found out that mystery character have powers and wired mind.

6. Summary of all research (conclusions)

Overall for my research I found beneficial facts on how I can produces my film and how I can direct and the different options that open to young people that trying to get their short film out there in the world. For my idea I will use two well know films and clash together to make it horror/ thriller. By doing this research that short horror films are target at young audience its more target at older audience so I need to make sure that my idea is more mature and suited for older. Due to my research the best option to get my short film out there is London Short Film Festival or YouTube because people uses these sites.

7. Unique Selling Point

I am confident that this  going to be successful because that most  people watch horror films and  done all my research on what options are open to me in the film industry. I think is also going to be successful because it has hook and twist at the end which throws the audience off and it makes you think. Furthermore, I use two film ideas that are really successful in my film that makes it unique. For my narrative structure it is going to open narrative because it does not have an ending, due to this the story builds up when progressing further into the film. This makes it more interesting to watch. Also  is going to have continuity style which flows through out the film

8. Budget

For my budget I would hope to spend:

Location-£100

Props -make up-£15, mask – no cost, knife-£3.00 and fake blood £10.00

Equipment- £20

Transport- free (bus)

9. Regulation & Certification

 BBCF-Films for theatrical release are normally classified by at least two Examiners using the published Guidelines. In most cases the decision is ratified by a Senior Examiner, but if the Examiners are in any doubt or fail to agree, or if important policy issues are involved, the work may be seen by other members of the Board up to, and including, the Director and Presidential team.[1]

Ofcom is the communications regulator in the UK. We regulate the TV, radio and video on demand sectors, fixed line telecoms, mobiles, postal services, plus the airwaves over which wireless devices operate.[1] For my film I am not going to get my short film examined because it not going to be realised in the cinema or social sites, but if my film was going to be in the cinema then it will have to be examined by the BBCF.

10. Revisions and changes/development of idea

for my original idea I made some changes. For example change it to a thriller to horror film instead because thrillers are usually based in the city and I wanted my location to be in a couple rooms and path ways. Also I cut some bits for example, my location in the school to older location   to make more appealing to adult teens and young adults because that’s my target audience. I decided to put two well-known films and take their ideas such as Hunger Games and Ouija.

11. Locations

This is going to be in Charlton house in 3 different rooms and path way. This is because it is a historic building which will help create a scarier atmosphere.

12. Distribution

For showing my film I’m going to show my film in London Short Film Festival which is an annual event that presents the best in UK short film-making talent. For a couple of weeks in January we take over London’s best independent cinemas and venues to showcase some amazing short films. The London Short Film Festival, now in its 13th year, has been recognised as the premiere UK showcase for cutting-edge UK independent film, while now accepting international submissions. By this it be good opportunities to make it know in London and can get examined by professional.

13. Evaluation

I have corrected your work there are some grammar mistakes and spelling mistakes. There are also some sentences that is correctly wrong. Please add some picture and screenshots.  

14. References and bibliography

www.ofcom.org.uk/about/what-is-ofcom/

https://www.kickstarter.com/about

https://www.kickstarter.com/about?ref=nav

https://www.kickstarter.com/help/faq/kickstarter%20basics

http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0770828/?ref_=nv_sr_1

http://www.imdb.com/title/tt2395427/?ref_=nv_sr_1

http://www.imdb.com/title/tt1204977/?ref_=nv_sr_1

http://www.bbfc.co.uk/case-studies/case-studies/from-archive

http://www.bbfc.co.uk/what-classification/15

http://www.bbfc.co.uk/what-classification/18

https://flock.am/login/?next=/dash/

https://www.nyfa.edu/student-resources/get-your-independent-movie-on-netflix/

http://www.telegraph.co.uk/technology/internet/9929070/BBFC-has-persuasion-job-over-online-ratings.html

http://encounters-festival.org.uk/

http://shortfilms.org.uk/

http://www.asff.co.uk/

http://www.showbox-app.com/about-us

http://www.bbfc.co.uk/what-classification

[1] www.ofcom.org.uk/about/what-is-ofcom/

[1] http://www.bbfc.co.uk/what-classification/15